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#1 wherethedrumsat

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Posted 09 August 2014 - 03:41 AM

i sat there enjoying a treat, oreo's that i will eat, they were crying and lying to set them free so i dipped them in milk and put them inside me!

hope u enjoy :)



                             

                                       

                      

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#2 Dragonslayerwei

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Posted 09 August 2014 - 06:05 AM

great! It would be better if you made it have a structure.


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#3 madman

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Posted 09 August 2014 - 06:17 AM

i agree with wei. perhaps put different verses on different lines so it won't be so confusing.


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#4 Zooty

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Posted 09 August 2014 - 09:43 AM

i too like to put things inside myself
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#5 Rcpangit25

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Posted 09 August 2014 - 01:30 PM

i too like to put things inside myself


What Kind Of Things ?

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#6 wherethedrumsat

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Posted 09 August 2014 - 04:27 PM

ok i will definitley make another one soon 



                             

                                       

                      

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