i sat there enjoying a treat, oreo's that i will eat, they were crying and lying to set them free so i dipped them in milk and put them inside me!
hope u enjoy
Posted 09 August 2014 - 06:05 AM
great! It would be better if you made it have a structure.
Posted 09 August 2014 - 06:17 AM
i agree with wei. perhaps put different verses on different lines so it won't be so confusing.
Posted 09 August 2014 - 09:43 AM
Posted 09 August 2014 - 01:30 PM
i too like to put things inside myself